Thursday 14 April 2016

Learning blog post




FREE CHOICE DESCRIPTION
Purpose: to describe
WALT: create content with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria:
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)

When I stroll through the rainforest I suddenly see something hiding in the plain grass. It had stripes on it. I do two big steps back then I hide behind a tree but the tiger's beautiful green eyes spot me in no time. Then he jumps at terrific speed.
When I saw the jump, it was huge. Its stripes were amazing, it's teeth are terrifically as sharp as knives that have been just carved. When he landed from his huge jump, I could hear his back feet scraping like mad in fury. Oh and how angry he was. 
I put my hand out and the tiger stopped.
The End  






Hi and welcome to my learning blog post, the year has been good so far. We have had one tracking sheet, and almost two tracking sheets. This is the first time I have been to Friday Funday. I can't wait!